First, I love your platform and concept. Bellow I am commenting on my first take - i.e. me just running through the tutorial for the first time for a short time.
In Tutorial:
- Allow mouse click or any key to continue (don't specify return key)
- under "You are hungry now" did you mean to spell "Shoopkeep" or "Shopkeep"
- Don't say "Button 1, Button 2, etc" Specify the key. I have no idea in the beginning what Button 2 is.
- "Be carefull of not starving" should be "Be carefull not to starve". Better yet, say "Be carefull not to run out of food, you will lose hit points over time until you have gathered food" (or something like that)
- Menu controls are confusing, and I'm getting hung up inside them because I have no idea how to get out. ESC should always toggle between menu and closing any menu that is currently open.
- Just figure out that little be of confusion - Chat session opened up behind menu, so I couldn't tell what was going on.
- definitely default WASD controls in addition to arrow keys
- "Press Button Undefined for a new player." Need to define a default, then allow player to change it in game.
- Allow player to turn off music in game.
- Umm how do I eat?? I have it selected in the menu, but how do I do it? How do I talk to the shopkeep to buy food?
- ugh, hung up in menu again. It says "locked" in upper right. Man do I wish I could hit ESC.
In Tutorial:
- Allow mouse click or any key to continue (don't specify return key)
- under "You are hungry now" did you mean to spell "Shoopkeep" or "Shopkeep"
- Don't say "Button 1, Button 2, etc" Specify the key. I have no idea in the beginning what Button 2 is.
- "Be carefull of not starving" should be "Be carefull not to starve". Better yet, say "Be carefull not to run out of food, you will lose hit points over time until you have gathered food" (or something like that)
- Menu controls are confusing, and I'm getting hung up inside them because I have no idea how to get out. ESC should always toggle between menu and closing any menu that is currently open.
- Just figure out that little be of confusion - Chat session opened up behind menu, so I couldn't tell what was going on.
- definitely default WASD controls in addition to arrow keys
- "Press Button Undefined for a new player." Need to define a default, then allow player to change it in game.
- Allow player to turn off music in game.
- Umm how do I eat?? I have it selected in the menu, but how do I do it? How do I talk to the shopkeep to buy food?
- ugh, hung up in menu again. It says "locked" in upper right. Man do I wish I could hit ESC.
